Sales copy review

[altwebdesign]

I've got some sales copy written, what do you guys think?
At the moment its very "feature" based, I was told to list Features, Advantages and Benefits and use that as a baseline.
I've been told to lead with the benefits instead of the features as thats what sells, but ive also been told by copy writers to lead with the features as its a technology based website and people will be looking for features rather than benefits for this type of industry.

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Im also going to re-write the bullet points and make anothe rversion that leads with the benefits instead of features. . .

Any thoughts?

Craig

[charharhar]

Depends on how you want to come off. I try and be light and playful, while still showing the benefits of my services.

Hope it helps!
Charlie