preview of my site...

**seungbongpark** · 10-14-2007 09:37 PM

www.displayinventory.com

sorry.. my website isnt fully functioning... only the home page and who we are is working...

please if you can.. tell me something you like and dont like.. thanks!

**mpolino** · 10-15-2007 09:42 AM

A couple of things. I think the site has a nice look and friendly feel but there are a couple things I would change.

First, all of the text on the site is made from images. This will make it impossible for any search engines to gather any info about your site.

Second, where it says "any questions, we liked to hear", I would change it to say "any questions? We would like to hear." I realize that English is probably second language, and you were very close.

Third, I am not really sure why you'd have a spot at the bottom for "our pictures". I am sure they are going to be examples of products so I would label it "our products".

You are on your way though. Good Luck!

**mpolino** · 10-15-2007 09:47 AM

One other small thing, and this because I am anal....the lower navigation menu...some of the links are in bold and some are not. Make them all the same.

**chaunna** · 10-15-2007 12:01 PM

I agree with mpolino. He gave some great advice!

One other thing is your logo...the "ad-sign" doesnt really stick out because of the color of the site. if anything, i'd want the ad-asign (which tells what your business is) to stick out more than "first"

I like the design...it's eye catching because the design isnt like most ad or sign websites...

**deep_impression777** · 10-15-2007 01:59 PM

The logotype size is a bit hard on the eyes. However, I like the colors and flow of this site, i just wish it was a little bit bigger.

**seungbongpark** · 10-15-2007 03:34 PM

Thanks guys!! I'll revise the website soon.Again.. Thanks for the tips!! keep them coming

**richkid** · 10-15-2007 04:35 PM

The full colours banner ad doesnt seem to fit the current style.

Otherwise looks fine.

**carrera87** · 11-08-2007 03:52 PM

nicely done m8

**zoobie** · 11-08-2007 08:19 PM

Originally Posted by richkid

The full colours banner ad doesnt seem to fit the current style.

Otherwise looks fine.

I agree. Best of luck!

**Josephian** · 11-08-2007 08:37 PM

nice funky feel to it

**deep_impression777** · 11-09-2007 04:01 AM

whoa! checked it out agin and its totally new! nice chouce for the color. It looks upbeat. Id suggest changing the orientation for the "welcome t first ad-sign" as it doesnt work as well as the " portfolio"