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    Post Needing Feedback on our NEW SITE

    Hi! We just launched our new website for managers for leadership training. We would love to hear some feedback..is it boring, to loud, etc...would you pay $99 for leadership, coaching, and conflict management training if you had 90- days unlimited use, able to get a certificate to prove you had taken the course, and can do this on your own time?

    THANKS for looking! We are not trying to sell you something (of course feel free to purchase if you want to take this certificate with you on interviews, and just for plain old wanting to learn A LOT about good leadership!)...we are looking for feedback...

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    I would absolutely never buy this course. The website looks very unprofessional. The fact that you have adbrite advertising on it is incredibly sketchy when you are already selling a primary service, this makes you lose credibility. The grammar and vocabularly used make it sound like someone in high school wrote it (how old are you?). Consider getting help with the copywriting.
    2 hours for $99 for an online course that has no credibility (other than a few testimonials which may or may not be real) is ridiculously expensive.

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    bump to kill spam.
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    Wink Thanks!

    Thank you for the feedback...actually if you read about the course we have three, 2 hour courses...I am an author of continuing education with a company called www.easyceu.com and these courses have been in the healthcare industry for over 2 years...these are paid courses, and approved through a national organization called NAB ...as far as my testimonials they are real, we did a "pilot" program with companies we have relationships with prior to launching...we know that we need to have our editor edit the content, and wanted to keep it simple...but now we are looking to change the front page due to your responses.

    Thanks again for your feedback, it's the only way we know what to change!!

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    well....look...let me diagnose why your site sucks so you know how to fix it

    your site is bad because it is missing 3 things: problem formulation, communication of unique features and communication unique benefits

    in short, you are not positioning your product as a substitute without substitutes

    correct these three things and there won't be a marketer in the world who'll tell you that you have a bad site

    and obviously, get rid of the ads

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    Akula, coudl you define these things for me:
    problem formulation-
    communication of unique features-
    communication unique benefits-
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    Fogive me if I get this wrong akula.

    Seems quite simple to me.

    Quote Originally Posted by DrMoney View Post
    problem formulation-
    What is the problem this company is going to fix for their customers.

    Quote Originally Posted by DrMoney View Post
    communication of unique features-
    Why this company over one of the thousand others that can be found online.

    Quote Originally Posted by DrMoney View Post
    communication unique benefits-
    Sorta hand in hand with the last one, but what will this company provide you with by the end of the training that other companies will not.
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    This is exactly What I had thought, but I wanted to make sure.
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    The content's okay but the site's simple. You might add color. Improve the logo.

    Don't be afraid to go beyond and be creative. Just don't forget that it's new look is not fancy and still look professional. Good luck!
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    i think that it need more color, what do you sell just by looking at it i dont want to read it i dont felt drawn into it. more color and beter navigation would be better and have a saying at the top of what you do we know the website so we dont need that at the top. sorry to be so harsh but i try to help people out. other then what i said before it looks good.
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    New logo, new color scheme, new navigation system.

    New everything - not to sound like a prick.

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    needs more design, change some colors, combine the light colors to some dark colors because it just too light & it floats. For this, it doesn't catch up any attention. Maybe you could justify some of your paragraphs so that it looks clean. Some images are blur. ;-)

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