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03-20-2008, 10:29 PM
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Mission Statement
Every company is supposed and must have a mission statement. The mission statement is the heart of your business operations.
Our mission statement
Here is our mission statement, and do let me know if you understand the meaning of these strings of words;
"At Gatepedia, our mission and values are to synergistically engineer unique infrastructures and efficiently coordinate diverse deliverables to exceed our customers' expectations."
But what does that mean? You tell me...!
Your mission statement
Now, it is your turn. What's your company's mission statement?
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03-20-2008, 10:40 PM
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To build 7,000,000 cost effective and energy efficient dome homes for the homeless around the world in the next 7 years.
As a 62 year young serial entrepreneur let me give you some advice: don't use to much lingo that people can't grasp.
Hugh
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03-20-2008, 11:11 PM
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“A business is defined by the mission statement. Only a clear definition of the mission and purpose of the organization makes possible clear and realistic business objectives.”
- Peter Drucker
After reading your mission statement the first time, I said huh?
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A thinker sees his own actions as experiments and questions--as attempts to find out something. Success and failure are for him answers above all.
Friedrich Nietzsche
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03-21-2008, 03:38 AM
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Location: California and Mexico
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Cole Taylor
After reading your mission statement the first time, I said huh?
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Me too.
That's not good.
Laymans terms are better.
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03-21-2008, 08:13 AM
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i just love it when some people react the same way you guys do... perfect....!
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RentersQ
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Welated
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Last edited by usakos; 03-21-2008 at 09:58 AM.
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03-21-2008, 09:47 AM
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Originally Posted by usakos
i just love when some people react the same way you guys do... perfect....!
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huh.....what?
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A thinker sees his own actions as experiments and questions--as attempts to find out something. Success and failure are for him answers above all.
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03-21-2008, 11:45 AM
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Your mission statement should be free of big words like you use.
Let me know what you think of my company's:
National Charity Services: Mission Statement
Our mission is to provide logistical and managerial support to non-profits in order to help them to achieve maximum profitability from all fund raising efforts.
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03-21-2008, 01:06 PM
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I like Google's motto: "Do no evil". three words only, cool, uhmm, i wonder who they direct that to... Microsoft.
And here's Microsoft mission statement: "Our mission and values are to help people and businesses throughout the world realize their full potential."
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Global Procurement and Concierge Services
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RentersQ
Never Sign a Lease Anywhere Without RentersQ.
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Wrisen
( Partner With Me, PM Me for Info)
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Welated
Never Date Anyone Without Welated.
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Gatepedia
Coming in 2009
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03-21-2008, 01:10 PM
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Both are simple and straight to the point... very well developed
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03-21-2008, 01:24 PM
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What kind of buzz are you trying to send with so many difficult words? I'm sure you understand what it says, but if your target market doesn't think exactly like you, I'd tone down the lingo a bit. There's no need for your customers to have to think about what your mission statement means. It should be something they can read once, understand and move on.
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03-21-2008, 02:01 PM
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Location: ADVERTISE HERE! Contact me for more details
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Originally Posted by GonnaBthere
What kind of buzz are you trying to send with so many difficult words? I'm sure you understand what it says, but if your target market doesn't think exactly like you, I'd tone down the lingo a bit. There's no need for your customers to have to think about what your mission statement means. It should be something they can read once, understand and move on.
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Is the mission statement for customers? Or for employees?
My opinion is that it is for employees, and the quickly entrepreneurs realize this, the quickly they stop using big, beautiful words and start using effective, useful words.
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