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Old 03-20-2008, 10:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Exclamation Mission Statement

Every company is supposed and must have a mission statement. The mission statement is the heart of your business operations.

Our mission statement

Here is our mission statement, and do let me know if you understand the meaning of these strings of words;

"At Gatepedia, our mission and values are to synergistically engineer unique infrastructures and efficiently coordinate diverse deliverables to exceed our customers' expectations."

But what does that mean? You tell me...!

Your mission statement

Now, it is your turn. What's your company's mission statement?
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Old 03-20-2008, 10:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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To build 7,000,000 cost effective and energy efficient dome homes for the homeless around the world in the next 7 years.

As a 62 year young serial entrepreneur let me give you some advice: don't use to much lingo that people can't grasp.

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Old 03-20-2008, 11:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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“A business is defined by the mission statement. Only a clear definition of the mission and purpose of the organization makes possible clear and realistic business objectives.”

- Peter Drucker

After reading your mission statement the first time, I said huh?
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Old 03-21-2008, 03:38 AM   #4 (permalink)
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After reading your mission statement the first time, I said huh?
Me too.

That's not good.

Laymans terms are better.
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Old 03-21-2008, 08:13 AM   #5 (permalink)
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i just love it when some people react the same way you guys do... perfect....!
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i just love when some people react the same way you guys do... perfect....!
huh.....what?
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Old 03-21-2008, 11:45 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Your mission statement should be free of big words like you use.

Let me know what you think of my company's:

National Charity Services: Mission Statement

Our mission is to provide logistical and managerial support to non-profits in order to help them to achieve maximum profitability from all fund raising efforts.
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I like Google's motto: "Do no evil". three words only, cool, uhmm, i wonder who they direct that to... Microsoft.

And here's Microsoft mission statement: "Our mission and values are to help people and businesses throughout the world realize their full potential."
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Both are simple and straight to the point... very well developed
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What kind of buzz are you trying to send with so many difficult words? I'm sure you understand what it says, but if your target market doesn't think exactly like you, I'd tone down the lingo a bit. There's no need for your customers to have to think about what your mission statement means. It should be something they can read once, understand and move on.
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What kind of buzz are you trying to send with so many difficult words? I'm sure you understand what it says, but if your target market doesn't think exactly like you, I'd tone down the lingo a bit. There's no need for your customers to have to think about what your mission statement means. It should be something they can read once, understand and move on.
Is the mission statement for customers? Or for employees?

My opinion is that it is for employees, and the quickly entrepreneurs realize this, the quickly they stop using big, beautiful words and start using effective, useful words.
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