milionaire dollar business

[6ThE-MilLiOnAiRe_9]

my name is joshua pitt and i am startin a big busness.
this is going to be a custom ( or desiner) burger stall with possilbities of franchiseing. burger stallz r getting very unpopular so this is a v. big potentil market for instnce mcdonalds r getting bigger so if we market ourselfs right we can beat them. also there will be shaia labouf workin for us so there will be big rapids of growth.

basicaly we will be making designer (custom) burgers so people wil buy of us. these will be like in the shapes of animals based on the personalitiez of the customers an d we got more cash becose of this. also we wil do mind readings and employ some phsychologists so like we say 'u are sharp and very aware the sourrndoings' and we sculpt them a burger/hotdog fox ect. like dis

also i am looking for an investor of $1 million so we cna get started
my dad wil also be investing (he used tio work at mcdonalds so he has alot of exprience)

also this business will be bigger and betta known than google so for isntance we will spread to china and russia (bcos of more customers) and then we will spread to japan an ureope --- we are also lookin to make 1 million every month so weneed big investors
the franchisers who will be buying of us will also get customs tall (for isntance wtih a big title on the front or lights on the back) and we will be selling burgers nd hotdoghs for more because they will be custom

i think this business has a lot of upertunity if you wanrt to know more or are interested in investing send me a message

also i am looking for some webdesigners and programers and mybe some tv adverterisers so we can get started as soojn as possible

i know this ids a big business opertunity and you cud all become billonnaires, we r loking fofr serious investors

i hope u like my (vrery new and big) idea
joshua pitt - ThE MilLIoNnAiRe (yes i wil be nxt yr)

btw u cant steal my busines cos i got it copyrighted to joshua pitt (c)

[6ThE-MilLiOnAiRe_9]

if u wangt to invest contact me by joshuap_1234 @hotmail .com N REPLY N TELL ME WUT U THINK!

[dfveteran]

Seems okay. Your expectations seem really large and that's good. But your project might sound a little off the wall, if you asked someone to invest in this type of project without research and development stats. It wont happen overnight to be better than big companies like google. If you fail the first time dont give up if you really believe in it. Goodluck. Just a tip; if you want people to take you seriously on such a big investment, you should stop with the ebonix and use proper grammar.

[6ThE-MilLiOnAiRe_9]

Seems okay. Your expectations seem really large and that's good. But your project might sound a little off the wall, if you asked someone to invest in this type of project without research and development stats. It wont happen overnight to be better than big companies like google. If you fail the first time dont give up if you really believe in it. Goodluck. Just a tip; if you want people to take you seriously on such a big investment, you should stop with the ebonix and use proper grammar.

thanks a lot for the advice i know i wil do it

[learningtodowell]

dfveteran was being encouraging and realistic at the same time. Be nice, 6millionaire6

[6ThE-MilLiOnAiRe_9]

dfveteran was being encouraging and realistic at the same time. Be nice, 6millionaire6

also i think we shud get a team of celebrities wrking once a month on the stall around the wrld then people will not now who or when someone is working nd they will visit asll the time to see the stars

[akula]

what do u know about business?

you're about to banned

[6ThE-MilLiOnAiRe_9]

you're about to banned

For what?

[Online Super Sale]

I think you should be a tad more realistic. Its not easy to get an investor to put a cent in your business unless its very well thought out. A bit of marketing won't win over mcdonalds. Google isn't even in the same industry so I don't understand the comparison. Before going any further, make a flow chart or something. And best of all, learn or try to be resourceful.

Good Luck!

[JackTheRipper]

The business idea does seem a bit awkward (sculpting burgers?).

[sleighter]

Spellcheck and proper grammer would be a good start. We all make grammer errors at one time or another.But your posts are hurting your efforts totally.

[strategy]

Optimism is great but you are being very ignorant. Firstly, you've collectively gathered small ideas that you think could work and you've literally pasted them together, effortlessly. I'm doubt anyone would invest in your pitch. Firstly, I agree with the comments on spell-check. Download Firefox and install a dictionary. Then, prepare your post. If it's a pitch, that's the least you can do. Talk it over with your dad, conduct a plan and establish the strong points whilst eliminating the weak. Create an emphasis on all of the strong points and gather some statistics as evidence for your statements. Creating a professional pitch is key. In any other case, you wouldn't be taken seriously.

The general structure of the idea is great. You're trying to find slim competition with big marketing opportunities, but I would recommend looking into it further.

[BusinessAdviser]

my name is joshua pitt and i am startin a big busness.
this is going to be a custom ( or desiner) burger stall with possilbities of franchiseing. burger stallz r getting very unpopular so this is a v. big potentil market for instnce mcdonalds r getting bigger so if we market ourselfs right we can beat them. also there will be shaia labouf workin for us so there will be big rapids of growth.

basicaly we will be making designer (custom) burgers so people wil buy of us. these will be like in the shapes of animals based on the personalitiez of the customers an d we got more cash becose of this. also we wil do mind readings and employ some phsychologists so like we say 'u are sharp and very aware the sourrndoings' and we sculpt them a burger/hotdog fox ect. like dis

also i am looking for an investor of $1 million so we cna get started
my dad wil also be investing (he used tio work at mcdonalds so he has alot of exprience)

also this business will be bigger and betta known than google so for isntance we will spread to china and russia (bcos of more customers) and then we will spread to japan an ureope --- we are also lookin to make 1 million every month so weneed big investors
the franchisers who will be buying of us will also get customs tall (for isntance wtih a big title on the front or lights on the back) and we will be selling burgers nd hotdoghs for more because they will be custom

i think this business has a lot of upertunity if you wanrt to know more or are interested in investing send me a message

also i am looking for some webdesigners and programers and mybe some tv adverterisers so we can get started as soojn as possible

i know this ids a big business opertunity and you cud all become billonnaires, we r loking fofr serious investors

i hope u like my (vrery new and big) idea
joshua pitt - ThE MilLIoNnAiRe (yes i wil be nxt yr)

btw u cant steal my busines cos i got it copyrighted to joshua pitt (c)

I still trying to figure out whether this is a joke or not. After reading it, I thought to myself that there's no way in hell that this is guy is serious. But then I thought, why would someone go to the trouble of writing that much if he wasn't serious.

If this was just a joke, you should probably find better use of your time.

If you were serious, you should probably find better use of your time.

[OnTheWayUp]

I still trying to figure out whether this is a joke or not. After reading it, I thought to myself that there's no way in hell that this is guy is serious. But then I thought, why would someone go to the trouble of writing that much if he wasn't serious.

If this was just a joke, you should probably find better use of your time.

If you were serious, you should probably find better use of your time.

Ditto. I agree with everyone who has already said it...ebonics hurts your image more than you could imagine.

[rogercbryan]

I read this post four times trying to see if I'm missing something. You want to make hamburgers shaped like animals? Had you said you had a new formula for the best tasting burgers (needs to be better then In-n-Out) I might have read on. I don't see people buying burgers that look like animals. When I get a burger I'm worried about quality and taste... not the shape.

McDonalds is no longer just a burger joint.. its the worlds largest owner of real estate... that would be hard to compete with.

Be realistic and life will be easier... spell check would help a bit too...