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Old 03-15-2008, 05:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi there,

I have just decided to start-up my own marketing and advertising agency and am looking for ANY comments, suggestions, and/or insights that you could help me out with...

My info is as follows:


Mission Statement
B Paul has one prime focus which is you: the client. We believe that the marketing and advertising campaign is what makes the company and we want to bring out your best potential. Some companies may already have a marketing strategy in place, but we take our marketing research and what is currently in place and transform it into something priceless.

What services do we offer?
B Paul Marketing & Advertising offers multiple services to help you and your company with all of their marketing and advertising needs such as:
  • Marketing Research
  • Non-Traditional Branding
  • Event Marketing Planning
  • Buzz Marketing Tactics
  • Field Research
  • Brand Development
  • Consumer Behavior Reports
  • Marketing Plan Development and Implementation
  • Consulting Services
  • Graphic Design
  • Brochures
  • Business Cards
  • Promotional Materials
  • And More!

If you are interested in one of the services offered above or would like more information, please contact Brandyn Anderson at BpaulMarketingandAdvertising@gmail.com

Who is Bpaul Marketing and Advertising?
B Paul Marketing & Advertising is a company based out of Saint Paul, Minnesota

Company founder, Brandyn Anderson, has a rich backround in the field of marketing and advertising within the thriving Twin Cities area as well as multiple projects across the upper midwest. Looking towards the future, he plans to share his experience, knowledge and unique insights with clients across the country that are looking to make the most of themselves.




Please visit my website at www.bpaul.net for a better visual...

Thanks much!
Brandyn P Anderson
Bpaul Marketing & Advertising
www.bpaul.net
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Old 03-15-2008, 06:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Your mission statement needs some work. It really is a little too cheesy and not very professional. The website could use a little sharpening up as well. It’s never easy getting started but you came to the right place for advice and guidance.
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Do you have any suggestions for the mission statement as far as tidying it up and making it more professional?
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The site itself is all over the place... too many attention grabbers. The top links are displaced and look like google ads. The other portions are too snippy... The resume is a wrapper... It should be completely re-done in my opinion. I hired a Public Relations manager for my new company, due to launch in early April - and she didnt have anything near that complicated... but it was to the point and easy to read.
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Old 03-16-2008, 04:12 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Why use a free web site service that puts ads on your site? That is defintely not very professional. You certainly should choose a different product out there which allows you to be advertisement free. There are some great products which are still free or very cheap.
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Ya, get rid of the advertisements on the top of the site, also, I would change the template, If i didnt take some time to read the content I would think it was some kind of destination/travel site.
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NO USP in that mission statement! What is that you are KNOWN for UNIQUELY?
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I agree with the last posts...Mission Statements are very underrated, and needs attention. I like the concept, keep us updated on how it turns out!
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Why does BPAUL.net have a hitcounter, a guestbook, etc
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