How well would this work?

[rekid]

I thought up a an idea for a website....

its still cut and dry ,but would like some feedback...

it revolves around success stories of how people have made good money but focusing on the elaborating the thought processes...

i noticed that the more success stories I read, the cleaner my "opportunity specs" got. It helps in showing you how something was done and you could create a twist on the example that you first read to suit your own needs....

so basically, people would send in stories they heard of how others made money (real life stories) as well recommendations for books that expand the entrepreneurial mind...... After all that reading of success stories I can "see" more opportunities and can create a clear visual in my head about how to execute to profit from it....

what do you think....

[akula]

again, critical error

the viability of the pitch can't be qualified because the pitch does not formulate a problem

what problem are you trying to solve? how important is this problem? who is experiencing this problem most severely? who else is solving this problem? why hasn't this problem been solved?

then, if there is adequate proof for a problem, I can critique your solution from the perspective of common hurdles that make for good solutions

no problem formulation = no feedback

[dosrotties]

Start with consultants that have contacts and credibility.
Facts tell and storyies sell.
When people want to look at my/our product or need help with business I sell then or edify the team. Our CFO managed 7 billion for Microsoft met with Bill once a week. Our developer brought Intel to Folsm, Ca. We can help you with structure your company and have investor opportunities. Last week one of out investor wanted to invest 30 million in Hawaii. Bla bla bla
Oh by the way our fee is 100 dollars an hour and 1 point per investment deal.
Sign the dotted line.

For 100 - 200 Dollars we analize your biz plan and go from there.
1000 dollars set up a meeting and fly into town and we meet with you for 4 hours.

Sounds pretty cool, I could start that tomarrow.