I think what you're doing is great. However, if I were someone interested in entering the competition I'd need a little more assurance as to who I'm putting my plan in front of.
You dont provide bios for management or your advisors. You also dont list who the judges will be, nor do you have any tombstones.
Again, I cant fault you for what you're doing. I just think you'd do good for more people by driving home a little more credibility.
------------
A thinker sees his own actions as experiments and questions--as attempts to find out something. Success and failure are for him answers above all.
Friedrich Nietzsche