Check out my Website <Writers Needed>

**I-c-da$** · 08-13-2007 12:24 AM

I am currently working on my website business.e-astate.com it will be a web portal of information concerning business and everything else business. It is aimed at mostly younger people and will also include a blog and '' Stock Watchout'' and possibly a ''VideoCast'' about 30-45 minutes long outlining different topics all business based with a news room setting with a group of 3 college students.

I really need writers that will help keep the different sections of the site alive such as the marketing section or the starting a business section. If anyone is interested in helping me kick off this site I will allow them to place Adsense, Adbrite ADs in there section.

If interested just PM me or write me at alexedavis@aim.com

FEEDBACK GREATLY APPRECIATED

**wully00** · 08-13-2007 12:46 AM

I like it. Props on the Prosper article~!

**I-c-da$** · 08-13-2007 12:52 AM

Yeah Prosper is really great thought Id give them a review.

**I-c-da$** · 08-13-2007 11:38 AM

More Feedback needed lol

**I-c-da$** · 08-15-2007 02:00 AM

Bump... I really need more feedback

**jpmorgan13** · 08-15-2007 02:34 AM

Horrible domain name. so horrible you should change it right away. even if you have good content, no one will remember it.

**I-c-da$** · 08-15-2007 03:42 AM

Yeah I know. Any Ideas ? And do you think content sites can still make decent amounts of ad revenue ?

**crackah** · 08-15-2007 08:27 AM

Umm, yeah its crap.

1. blue on black, is not good
2. ads are large and way annoying, take away from the content
3. top image, is a little wtf

**I-c-da$** · 08-15-2007 02:02 PM

dude no one has ask you to be rude or anything act proffesional and dont act like a goof this coming from a 19 year old. I ask'ed for feedback not for rudeness.

**crackah** · 08-16-2007 08:20 AM

not rude, just ideas. sorry.

**n/a** · 08-16-2007 08:41 AM

lol dont worry he was the same way with me. You get used to it

**crackah** · 08-16-2007 09:42 AM

shhhh

Im only nice when i want to be!

**T-Quilter** · 08-16-2007 10:44 AM

I think your layout is nice and clean, it's just a little hard to read because the colors do not contrast very well. Try using pale shades of yellow/orange to contrast with blue (they're across each other on the color wheel). You can also try making the font slightly larger bc you still have a lot of empty space on the site. And for the headings of each category.

And a couple typos you might want to watch out for:

"Welcome to Business.E-Astate.com the online resource for everything business. Business.E-Astate.com ofers great resources and articles on anything business. It doesnt matter if you already have an established business or are just getting into entrepeneurship Business.E-Astate.com will have the information you need to get started on your path to success."

If it's possible, you should change the domain name to something that describes the website more concisely.

Hope that helps and good luck!