[sl.market]

Hey guys,

let me know whats up with my updated website....

www.marketerebooks.com

[legit hustler]

looks great!

[adamg]

too much text on the homepage. looks good.

[NeeJam]

nice i like it

[Muddy]

Looks great

[akula]

good.

1) write consisely and to a specific formula: top three benefits, top three features; call for action.

2) put in privacy policy and trust badges

3) get a a good AJAX popup at http://prototype-window.xilinus.com/

4) Put in a blog + RSS feed ( I can take care of this for you)

5) Put in an affiliate program

coming along nicely

[hostingdiva]

The colors are good - not too much red. I would recommend that you use either a darker font or a different font because people who are using a higher resolution will strain their eyes.

I don't think that you have too much text but I hope you understand that most people will not read all of that text. Thus be sure that you've adequately highlighted all the "important" stuff. Also, some of the text seems to be a bit crowded so you may want to put in some graphics or pictures to help in separating all the words .. something other than just the lines.

Also, you do not need to indent each paragraph. Generally indentation is great when you're writing stuff that will be printed but text that will appear on line do not need to be indented. The indentation is actually a bit distracting.

From your header section I'm not clear on what you do... do you sell e-books or allow others to post their projects? I think you should clarify that because that is the first thing people see and some may not read on for clarification.

[dean29]

I like the layout. I suggest looking over what you've written on the site and making it flow smoother.

I wrote an e-book awhile ago on seducing girls for guys under 25 years old. The catch was that it is written by a girl (obviously not). But hey, I'll give the book to you and we split profits 50/50 if you can get some sales. Lemme know

[akula]

Originally Posted by dean29

I like the layout. I suggest looking over what you've written on the site and making it flow smoother.

I wrote an e-book awhile ago on seducing girls for guys under 25 years old. The catch was that it is written by a girl (obviously not). But hey, I'll give the book to you and we split profits 50/50 if you can get some sales. Lemme know

yowwwza!

hell, i'd buy that....for a social science project of course