Young Entrepreneur Forums  
en·tre·pre·neur –noun Entrepreneur, translated from its French roots, means "one who undertakes." The term Entrepreneur is used to refer to anyone who undertakes the organization and management of an enterprise involving independence and risk as well as the opportunity for profit.
Find Qualified Vendors
 

Welcome to the Young Entrepreneur Forums

   
NBTL vbBux / vbPlaza NBTR

Find Business Partners Get Involved in Startups Commercial Real Estate Startup Jobs Find Business Opportunities


Young Entrepreneur Forums » General Business » General Business » Can you criticize our website?



Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Old 04-29-2008, 01:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
Junior Member
Activity Longevity
0/20 1/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssssss6
Total Points: 1,931.35
Can you criticize our website?

hey guys. what can you suggest to make it better? I would like to make it look more professional. How can i make it come up to the top on most high traffic search engines?
loik is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 01:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
Junior Member
Activity Longevity
0/20 1/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssssss6
Total Points: 1,931.35
had to wait for 5 posts

Amirzadeh Law
loik is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 01:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
Senior Member
clp11479's Avatar
Activity Longevity
0/20 9/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssss213
Location: Connecticut - USA
Total Points: 9,385.53
homepage is very plain.

i'd recommend going to some law websites and see what looks like a professional layout and then do something similar to that.
clp11479 is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 03:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
Senior Member
Frenchiexno1's Avatar
Activity Longevity
2/20 10/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssss105
Total Points: 2,612.37
It looks very basic, as if you designed it on Frontpage. Colours are dull, the black along the left is awkward, would prob work better centrered. Needs some time and effort spent on it.
__________________
Plooka.com
Love the Mountains - Love Plooka.com
Frenchiexno1 is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 03:41 PM   #5 (permalink)
YE Veteran
RLorenzen's Avatar
Activity Longevity
14/20 6/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssss684
Location: New York
Total Points: 26,430.69
It is very basic and needs improvments, but, consider this. When people go to a law firm's site they are not looking for flashy graphics, slide shows, music, revolving widgets, etc. They want to find the information they need and contact you. Most average people do not careless whether your site is flash or html or whether you use special tech features, etc. They want to be able to easily find what they are looking for.

I don't think you'll need some high tech, lots of bells and whistles website for your industry. It could use some improvements though, but, you don't need to go crazy.

Improve the layout and make the site a little brighter. I have an idea for what you should do, but I just can't place my finger on it. The site's definitely lacking something.

Just my $0.02

Last edited by RLorenzen : 04-29-2008 at 03:50 PM.
RLorenzen is online now  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 04:29 PM   #6 (permalink)
Senior Member
lamarsh's Avatar
Activity Longevity
5/20 4/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssss259
Location: Richmond, VA
Total Points: 10,276.50
In firefox there seems to be a text issue. The word LAW appears in bold in the middle of your body text for some reason.
__________________

Graphic Design Tutorials/podcast by me <---Want to learn to be a graphic designer?
http://marshgraphicdesigns.com<--My Design Company "need a logo?"
My design work + Fun Projects.<--My personal works
lamarsh is online now  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 05:44 PM   #7 (permalink)
Senior Member
Activity Longevity
12/20 1/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssss315
Location: The United States of America
Total Points: 6,971.00
I think the site was very plain and I think some of the grammar could have been better. Also, the word LAW gets in the way of the information sometimes. I have to ask this, why do you include information on the climate and other aspects of Canada? It didn't fit well with me. But of course, that's just my opinion.
__________________
"Who Else Wants To Know How To Make Money With Facebook?"
- written by a yE member, Hooman Noori


Got a site? Need more traffic to it? Submit your site for as little as nothing here.

Sick of get rich quick scams? ME TOO!!! But honestly, this one has really served me well. Try it out!

Check out some of my blogs: Survive This Recession and What's up With Today?
Jay Brass is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 05:49 PM   #8 (permalink)
Junior Member
UpAllNight's Avatar
Activity Longevity
0/20 1/20
Today Posts
0/0 ssssssss6
Location: brighton
Total Points: 281.44
its fooked. Get a web designer to make u up a nice website, or get me to find u a nice template to fix up
UpAllNight is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 09:28 PM   #9 (permalink)
Member
Yiie's Avatar
Activity Longevity
2/20 2/20
Today Posts
0/0 sssssss70
Location: Australia
Total Points: 2,761.91
I agree with others that the website is quite plain and the colours, font and layout you have chosen just doesn't come across as professional. As your business is in the legal sector, your website should reflect your credibility and professionalism.

I also don't get the "About Canada" section. It seems like you have just copied and pasted sections from the Canada Citizen and Immigration site.
__________________
www.bottledupemotions.com.au- Bespoke fragrance and aromatherapy
Yiie is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old 04-29-2008, 11:22 PM   #10 (permalink)
Junior Member
Activity Longevity
0/20 6/20
Today Posts
0/0 sssssss40
Location: shanghai
Total Points: 559.34
first, your home page is too simple,in other words , it is not professional ,just a para describing your business. second , your site is not user-friendly.forgive me, the first sight i saw it , i wanna to quit.to make your site attractive , your should pay attention to the color , font , web graphics.i suggest you study other law websites and then duplicate their
good points.
__________________
visit my blog yiwu business
jack1887 is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Spurl this Post!Reddit! Wong this Post!
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



Navigation
Register! - Join Now - It's Free
Registration at YoungEntrepreneur.com is completely free and takes only a few seconds. By registering you'll gain:

- Full Posting Privileges.
- Access to Private Messaging.
- Optional Email Notification.
- Ability to Fully Participate.

To Register now click here
Quick Register - It's Free
User Name: