Business Flyer Advice.

[JanaeK]

Hi,

On my flyer I have the text - "Find it all here on WebsiteURL and never miss out again!

Then beneath that I have - "Visit:" then the logo.

Based on this information do you think I should include the words " for more details" next to the logo so it will read : Visit [LOGO GRAPHIC- which is the site's url] for more details.
OR
Visit [LOGO GRAPHIC- which is the site's url] To find out whats the buzz about!

Thanks in advance for any advice.

[Ryan.King1809]

It depends on what image you would like to provide for your company. The second example sounds more playful. To be honest it reads as though you are saying exactly the same thing 3 times, giving it a sort informercial vibe.

It's a bit hard to provide anything really constructive without revealing some background information on your business.

[GotLiveChat]

Without an idea of what "it" refers to, it's hard to say.
Don't forget to track the flyer success by using some type of unique URL -- like yoursite.com/flyer -- else you won't know how well it worked :-)
If you find you're not getting visits to your site using the flyer, you may want to provide some type of 'freebie' to get ppl to visit your site.

[JanaeK]

Thanks for the advice.

[Orissaplot]

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[DigitalPalette]

Your first statement should be less direct and more of a brand-building statement depending on the direction your going for and your target market.

The last line should include the for more details and only use the graphic in place of the word if it contains atleast the ".com" in it.