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    JE26 is offline Junior Member
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    Need your advice?

    Hi all,

    I've been working as a carpenter for 7 years and have decided to start up my own carpentry business.
    I have been running the business for over year now and my income has been steady, however I need to increase revenue and reach more potential customers. I have recently
    built a new website and would like to get some general feedback.

    jecarpentryservices.co.uk

    Many thanks in advance for all your help.

    Eoin

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    JE26 is offline Junior Member
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    Here is my site:

    J.E Carpentry Services

    Thanks Again

    Eoin

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    generationy is offline Moderator
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    Hey Nice website:

    My suggestion would be that you include more of a "story" in your About Us section that will attract more attention/interest. I am sure there are hundreds of similar businesses out there and so you have to give the audience a story of perhaps how you started, how you grew the business etc. so they feel like you are genuine and really the right choice for their carpentry needs.

    For example, some of the biggest companies today have a story that they so proudly promote in their marketing campaigns, about us pages etc. You have to differentiate and share a story that others can relate to and even find your business as being the right choice.

    Make sure your logo links back to your homepage. It isn't a link right now, will help for navigation purposes. The last thing I would say is that you need to put some pictures on your site that will act like "visual testimonials" from past customers as points of validation for your future clients. Its important to share as much as possible to make yourself seem genuine to the prospective client especially since there are so many competitors in your space.

    All the best man!

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