16 and out in the world

**honey1582** · 11-20-2008 10:50 AM

So hi! My name is Chryslyn and I'm from Jacksonville, FL. I just recently set up a website and printed and sent out business cards. Other than that I don't know what to do. Can anyone help me? My site is livindalifeinc.info and my site is basically the jobs we offer, the requirements, it tells you about me and my partner and it allows you to comment on the website.

**kimbeckers** · 11-20-2008 10:54 AM

Hi, and welcome to the forum, do you mind sharing what your site is about or the link? It may put us in a better position to help you promote it.

**Phranksizzle** · 11-20-2008 11:04 AM

Tell us EXACTLY what your product/service is, what your goal is, and what direction you have in mind. That way we can better help you.

Good luck!

**honey1582** · 11-20-2008 11:09 AM

ok. our company is like a one stop shop. You know how when you look in the phone book you see a list of different services, such as doctors and lawyers? Then you have to go and because they are run by different companies you have to pay two different prices. At Livin Da Life Inc we make it easier for you. We provide both services and charge you one equal low price.

**Phranksizzle** · 11-20-2008 11:39 AM

I have absolutely no idea how that would work or what kind of customers you would get. Who is your target market? I'm not trying to down you business idea, maybe I'm just not getting it.

**honey1582** · 11-20-2008 01:06 PM

ok basically our company is one big umbrella for all the little companies we are trying to run. does that make sense?

**Phranksizzle** · 11-20-2008 01:12 PM

Gotcha!

So you own a doctor/lawyer/etc? Or are you just an affiliate with them? Thats a tough one either way.

**domore** · 11-20-2008 01:13 PM

Is your company really incorporated? You don't add inc unless your incorporated. I would look over a lot of the spelling and fix it as these are little errors. How do you go about and find all these positions? Who provides the health insurance? Before launching I would probably get all your legal work done for something like this.

**honey1582** · 11-20-2008 01:28 PM

[QUOTE=Phranksizzle;221256]Gotcha!

"So you own a doctor/lawyer/etc? Or are you just an affiliate with them? Thats a tough one either way."[QUOTE]

well no not really but we do own the company they work for. like the lawyer works for "Godfrey and Godfrey"

**honey1582** · 11-20-2008 01:29 PM

no we're not incoporated yet but we will be in 5 days

**dcfauno** · 11-20-2008 01:55 PM

You should start with proof-reading the copy on your homepage and correcting the errors.

Also, "Chryslyn loves music and controlling things." .... controlling things? Kind of bizarre.

**honey1582** · 11-20-2008 01:57 PM

ok thanks daniel. my partner made the site. i'll change that asap.

**RLorenzen** · 11-20-2008 05:09 PM

hmm...interesting site...it's kind of unorganized (your business and your website), PM me and I can give you some tips.

**Brainy** · 11-24-2008 12:04 AM

Hey good luck with the online business or offline business. I took a look at your website, it needs some work...I am sure that will come in time. Later.