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Old 09-19-2006, 12:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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v5.0 of my website

Was hoping to get some critiques on my new design, content, services offered.

www.mpyremarketing.com if there are any typos please don't be shy in calling me out on em.
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Old 09-19-2006, 12:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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hi

just looked at your site looks great, can you PM me pricing for the google articles and driven visitors to my site?

i think i just found one misspelling services link, 3rd arrow from left,
managment = management?

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Old 09-19-2006, 01:23 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Love the concept!
Hate the wide pages!
I like to scroll down, not to the side!!

Keep up the good work!

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Old 09-19-2006, 01:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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A few things: your "logo" or title bar is hard to read.

This is a personal thing and some folks might disagree: I hate having to scroll left when I'm on a website. While I understand that it kinda goes with what the examples are showing - I find it irritating, and on websites that require me to scroll horizontally as opposed to vertically, I typically leave the site.

From the site I gather that you do web design. That being said - you need to communicate an air of understanding good web design elements. That needs to be the FIRST thing folks see.

I like the coloring and I kinda dig the big arrow that contains your site info: maybe you can make the site vertical and reposition the arrow to have it face down to see examples of your work.
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Old 09-19-2006, 02:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i dont like the scrolling right it just seems more unproffesional, other than that a great idea and a good looking site that should do well
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GREAT JOB!!
The side scroll is very interesting..I like it..it's different. Whether people like it or not..they will remember it..and that is what you want sometimes.

Real Quick...This link is broken..it is of the site with the black page
http://www.mpyremarketing.com/graffixx.html
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Old 09-19-2006, 02:44 PM   #7 (permalink)
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oh crap yeh forgot to load that up....

I know people don't prefer to scroll sideways...thats web design 101...more like the sign on the door before you get to class!

Daniel knew what I was going go for...memory...and that I can create pages that get remembered.

I thank you guys for your reviews sounds like i did everything right except for the sideways scrolling...and that I am prepared to live with.

As always youse guys are awesome.
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I think it is a great site.. Personally I like the side scroll. It is different and you rarely see people doing it. But, I don't think it is a reason to leave the webpage, especially if it has good content!!

If it wasn't for reinvention.. Then we wouldn't have half the technology we have these days.. Think positive and be open minded..

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heh

Now thats customer loyalty!

Yeah I have an army! lol it felt like it for a minute anyhow

Thanx for the comment Julie (no i didn't pay her...I couldn't afford to with the prices I charge her anyways )


that broken link is fixed now of the graffixx site demo....the contact button is still unoperational...gotta get around to gettin a contact form done
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not a fan of scrolling right. Otherwise the website is not too bad.
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