My Website - Landing Page Help

**CiD743** · 10-17-2007 11:30 AM

When I first decided I wanted to own a business, I tried a franchise. I have a lot of automotive experience so I started there. I had some good things going for me, oil companies were willing to back me(partly) and I had a great business plan. I finally got the ball rolling and was completely hosed by the deal. It was form that experience, and the knowledge I gained afterward, i created my website.

It is not secret, based on my on my signature, that have a website called plan2profit.net.

The reason for this post, is to ask about advise for a landing page. I have good traffic to my site, but few people actually become members. The best success I've had is with the most basic design. The site is completely free, and of course I would love for all of you to sign up, but mainly I would like your opinion for landing page design. Thanks ..

**zoobie** · 10-17-2007 08:09 PM

Took a quick look and looks fine to me.

**allysa** · 10-17-2007 09:28 PM

Play with colors by adding other colors except blue, add some images maybe at the header which is related to money and luxury, sidebar and hover looks fine. Good luck!

**CiD743** · 10-18-2007 02:54 PM

Thanks for the input. I had pictures and some flash/shockwave images before; but conversions were waaay down then.

I will try different colors tho

**harrymcwealth** · 10-18-2007 03:24 PM

You need to put information (excerpts) onto the front page.

**chaunna** · 10-18-2007 05:19 PM

Just checked out your landing page and heres a few tips...

first, your text is explaining the features and not the benefits of
joining.

second, you have 14 links off the landing page (not counting your navigation bar.

If you want people to sign up you have to only give one direction.

Check out my optin page - this week I've got a 50% optin ration and other landing pages i have created had 60% optins...