Creating a Great Tagline!

[Mr Klean]

TAGLINES

I am changing my identity for the final time, with new logos, stationary, and a new tagline, here are some examples of what I could come up with.
I feel that some of these are really tacky, any suggestions or help would be great.


Tommorow's to late
When you care enough to have the best
Because so much is riding on your clean image
Vancouver’s Premier Restaurant Cleaning Solution.
Making your restaurant shine.
A reflection of your business.
Outstanding Cleaning Solutions
experience the difference of true professionals
You’ll be lost without us
We offer a different perspective
"Hate excuses? We do too."
Vancouver’s Premier Restaurant Cleaners.
It’s your restaurant and your image, don’t you deserve the best?
How Important is your restaurants image.
Imagine...

[Inglesa]

Hi Mr Klean,

What's the biggest thing that your customers complain about the most? Be specific...

Getting grease off the kitchen walls? Getting tables and chairs spotless? Having a fresh smell that's not overpowered by cooking smells? The smell of toxic chemicals in the cleaning materials?

Once you work out what their main grumble is, then make your tagline sound like THE number one solution to that problem. That way you immediately gain their attention.

For instance,

- Cleaning That Leaves Nothing But a Sparkle Behind!
- Eco-Friendly Products That Are Tough On Kitchen Grime

Ok, those might not be worthy of an advertising Oscar, but you get the point I'm making...

By the way, your signature link www.cleaningconcepts.ca leads to a dead page.

Good luck!

[Mr Klean]

Hi Mr Klean,

What's the biggest thing that your customers complain about the most? Be specific...

Getting grease off the kitchen walls? Getting tables and chairs spotless? Having a fresh smell that's not overpowered by cooking smells? The smell of toxic chemicals in the cleaning materials?

Once you work out what their main grumble is, then make your tagline sound like THE number one solution to that problem. That way you immediately gain their attention.

For instance,

- Cleaning That Leaves Nothing But a Sparkle Behind!
- Eco-Friendly Products That Are Tough On Kitchen Grime

Ok, those might not be worthy of an advertising Oscar, but you get the point I'm making...

By the way, your signature link www.cleaningconcepts.ca leads to a dead page.

Good luck!

Thanks for that, I am currently just finishing up my website and will be launching it soon, there are a few things they complain about from previous service providers, I'll get the ball rolling and see what I can come up with in the mean time. Thanks for the help

[TylerBakerllc]

I experienced the same dead page.