Please Review My Website

[hosseinalipour]

www.english.aychy.com
with clixgalore

[zoobie]

Hello there! Welcome.

Your site's okay. Just read the news and contents.

[steven.ruddell]

Good looking site but i think it needs work on content. you need to have good content if you want more people to come to your site. Just a thought

[hosseinalipour]

please review again
www.english.aychy.com (news >>>> (new site) good offers)

[carlreed]

I see you like the idea of affiliating and its a good thing to get into. Your site needs content, to me it just looks lke a few sales pitches crammed into 1 page, you need some structure and some original content, without content you will be deadlisted on all of the search engines unless you pay. Theres also to many adverts, you should use your space effectivley, have at most 2 adverts per page and try to use text ads from google instead of pictures, they have a far higher clickthrough rate.

The ads are not relevent to the content either and this will lead to a dramatic fall in your clickthrough rate. I have been affiliating for years and if i were to give you one piece of advice it would be to research about it every day and dont stop. Take a look at my site, www.makingmoney-onthenet.com I have just invested in a new .com domain and rehosted it. I get a very high clickthrough rate because of the positioning of my ads.

[ianternet]

IDK - the site looks cluttered to me - maybe because I like organization - there is too much graphics and the page is not centered, which is an issue to me

needs better content

just my opinions

[NMB]

There is a phrase you need to keep in mind when designing any website - "Don't Make Me Think!" (A great book on this subject too. Look it up).

When first presented with your site, my mind is saying the following (in no particular order):

1. What's all this about? It's not really clear what this site is for.
2. Is it selling something?
3. Lot's of spelling mistakes
4. Mmmm... he should really check his grammar
5. Why does he put a space *before* each comma. ( , ) I find that very annoying.
6. Too much advertising. Looks like if I click on anything, it will take me away from the site.

Do you see what I mean? Run some usability tests on the site. Get your mum, dad, brother, sister, partner, gran etc... to sit down and load the site. Tell them nothing about the site. Watch very carefully what they do, and most importantly, get them to speak their thoughts out loud.

Fight the temptation to guide them, as you will not be there to guide someone on the other side of the world.

Sorry if all that seems a touch negative, but hopefully you find it useful.

cheers.

Nick

[Mikey1205]

IDK - the site looks cluttered to me - maybe because I like organization - there is too much graphics and the page is not centered, which is an issue to me

needs better content

just my opinions

This site offers me nothing and you everything. Why should i visit?

[Francis Simisim]

Great site, but dont you think that there's too many adverts? I mean it looks so cramped to me, maybe its just me though lol!

[Zoxak]

My initial thought is that the site itself serves no distinct purpose. It doesn't look bad, it's just not very relevant. Try to add some related content to the site, and it should be on its way to being a good one. Good luck with it mate.

[natsm16]

get rid of so much banner adds, try text link see my website here

[rejoice]

too much going on and i don't know where to look

[paul2145r]

Well, to start off with, I think that you are going in the right direction, but you need to choose a direction that you want your site to go. Because it is so cluttered, it's hard to tell what you're trying to sell/provide/do/promote. The goal of a good affiliate/sales web site is to guide the visitor where it is you want them to go, without pushing or prodding them. In your case, you simply chose to drop everything in their lap, and expect them to sort through the mess. Get rid of some of the ads, choose a niche, and Organize your information. Good luck!