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Old 12-23-2004, 01:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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review my audio store

I just finished building my online store. It is an audio store, targeted at high school adn college students. It also specialized in portable audio and related products. I made the design young and appealing(hopefully) to my target audience. What do you guys think of it and what suggestions do you have? Thanks.

www.purefiveaudio.com/index.php


Note: It is not quite done yet.
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Old 12-24-2004, 01:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-26-2004, 01:03 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the overall style of it. I must say that you should fill the page a little more but you can do that as time goes on. Its a good start... i am sure you'll be tinkering on this as time goes... mayb have monthly specials on the main page... bigger pictures would be nice to see too. Mayb create a forum for buyers of your products. Just a couple of thoughts
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Old 12-26-2004, 01:06 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Also you should tie the products into the page a little more... then look like they are floating in space and that there is no rhime or reason to them... saw december's specials... nice but use a graphic to make it stand out... cause if you look at it; it doesn't catch the eye... good stuf so far!
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I see broken images on the front page. I assume that these are feeds that you are using, and don't have the images saved to your site?

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Luc, I think I"m going ot put a border with rounded corners around each product on the homepage to help tie things in. I'll try putting some graphics in aswell.


Karen, No I actually have all of the images on my server. I've been updating my products and changing everything around so some of the product images have gone astray.
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Luc, I think I"m going ot put a border with rounded corners around each product on the homepage to help tie things in. I'll try putting some graphics in aswell.


Karen, No I actually have all of the images on my server. I've been updating my products and changing everything around so some of the product images have gone astray.
The border sounds like a good start i think... you've got to do something about the double listing of the product pages... could be hard for your customers to read the way it currently is. Don't kill it with graphics but more and clearer ones would help you sell more i think. Just my two cents! Talk soon
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My store is now open and if you guys need anything audio.... US orders only, sry. I'm still waiting for my merchant account info to use authorize.net, but I'm using Paypal at the moment.
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I like what you did... the graphics are there and they aren't over powering.... awesome... best of luck come the new year in your business and personal life!
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Great job on the iPod graphics! The site is looking great!
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