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Old 01-18-2007, 12:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Critique My Website!

Hey guys, this is my first online venture and the first website I have ever worked on. The business is that I just ghostwrite ebooks on any topic requested.

The url is www.wewriteebooks.com

All constructive criticism is welcome, from the design to the content. I obviously want to make this the best site possible, so I figured some of the entrepreneurs on here could relate and offer sound advice.

Thank you,

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Old 01-18-2007, 12:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The general idea of your site is great but the design could use some tweaking.

I would suggest that you center the site in the middle of the page. Rather than calling the section "services", maybe you can call them products or packages.

It also seems like you have alot of content per page, perhaps you could split it up a bit and keep a standard font in order to make it more readable.

You could also provide a downloadable example of an ebook or document that you have created in the past.
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Old 01-18-2007, 01:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I think your site could use a little bigger font, since to me the smaller font makes it look a little cluttered, but it's just my opinion.
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Old 01-18-2007, 05:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice Idea - But Some Work To Do

Hi AndrewD

I like the idea, so good on you for that.

It's always tough putting a first site design together, though - and I agree you should keep it simple, easy to navigate, and forget over-flashy presentation.

You have a great product idea - but your potential purchasers need to get some idea of quality - beyond your say so...

I have bought/ended up with numerous plr ebooks that are (as you imply) frankly rubbish - and I think potential buyers need to see examples of work, say a series of pages that might show, say a random 2 pages out of ebooks you have already written. This would preserve your product as noone is likely to 'steal' two random pages - but will also give an decent amount by which to judge your work. PLUS this will enable you to expand the number of content pages on the site so necessary for SE visibility.

On one or two other issues - I think its a mistake to use a crowded mish-mash of diffreing fonts and colors on the front page - and as is often the case 'centralised' content seems to 'clash' with lefthand justified content when you see it together. The whole needs molre 'room to breathe' - I would say 'use more white space' (except your bacjkground is 'black' - and I think you might reconsider this - black is a hard color to carry off to be honest, without looking a bit tacky).

You are right that if you want to make an impact on the market place you need the site to look professional. Maybe - and just as you suggest in your own 'sales pitch' (that is that for other business folk 'writing ebooks' themselves is too time consuming for them) - perhaps the same argument goes for site building AND trying to write ebooks it too much to try and crack at one go for wewriteebooks?

Perhaps you could do a trade with a more seasoned web site designer who might like to swap some design work for an ebook.

Take a look at some 'broadly' competitive sites and see how they deal with their own 'look and feel'. Whilst I think it is good to steer away from 'obvious' templates (or at least do some 'customizing' if you use one) -- at the other end of the scale it is hard to garner a professional image without a crisper, more professional 'look and feel' to the site (probably involving some more graphic input).

A final comment - don't be too focussed on selling yourself cheap. I realize you want to get the business - BUT if you are selling something for a quarter of what others are - and THEY are rubbish...then you are underselling yourself.

By all means advertise 'deep discounts' during your launch phase - and by all means offer repeat buyers cotinued savings on future additional purchases - but I learnt the hard way - IF you sell yourself cheap people think you ARE cheap! It was, and is, never a successful business ploy to sell high quality for bargain basement prices.

If, say, your basic offer made it clear that your ebook's cost US$499.00 but during launch any orders received will be at 75% discount it gives you a stronger point to come from when you want to put your price up - it is already clear what the price really is!! You can always offer your list of clients incentives to 'buy again' at the price they first bought at.

On a small point - you don't show your currency on the main products/pricing page. I think you should make it clear that its US$ - so potential UK buyers can see what adeal they are getting whilst £1=$2

OH YES...I nearly forgot - I would advise - NEVER put your email address, even a disposable one, on your web pages - UNLESS you want a boatload of spam! You'll be wading through rubbish trying to pick out serious punters...and MIGHT miss one You need to get an onsite form that folks can use to contact you!

Just some disparate thoughts I hope may be helpful - good luck

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Old 01-19-2007, 06:53 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Spacing is to tight, but overall it is a functional page. However it does not look professional and that can hurt when you want to drive traffic to your site.

Try to find a good looking site with modern looks and try to clone it in Photoshop. But the site is fine you could probably make a few bucks from it.
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Old 01-19-2007, 11:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Great idea, site design isn't great but with some changes it can make you money. But center the page cause I no it annoys me and I would click out for that reason.
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Old 01-19-2007, 01:08 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I would do some research on what colors people find most inviting, as well as research different designs that are affective for attracting and keeping traffic.

It looks like this is your first completed attempt, and if it is, then good job! Now, get inventive, do some research, or spend some money to get it done.

For some good ideas check out http://coolhomepages.com/

Just look at the ones without flash and you will get a good idea of what you can do.

Another good idea is to use Google to find you biggest competitor, then take their site and do it better!
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Old 01-19-2007, 02:01 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I'd lost this link when I replied yesterday - but in and around this link is palnety of good website developemnt advice from one guy generally thought of as the 'font of knowledge' on the subject Jakob Nielsen - worth a look:

http://www.useit.com/alertbox/9605.html

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I'd lost this link when I replied yesterday - but in and around this link is plenty of good website development advice from one guy generally thought of as the 'font of knowledge' on the subject Jakob Nielsen - worth a look:

http://www.useit.com/alertbox/9605.html

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Old 01-19-2007, 06:50 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanks for all of the responses =).

I'm not sure how to do it so my friend is going to center my website in Dreamweaver for me tonight. When I get home I'll unify the font and make it easier to read.

Thanks websage I guess you're right about underselling myself. I will do a 50% opening month discount or something to give it some flare.

Thanks guys.
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Old 01-20-2007, 07:03 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Good idea, the design is pretty iffy. Go find a free template, there's loads of good ones.

And lastly, I think your price is too cheap. I wouldn't sign up because I would seriously not expect any value. Maybe put some examples of your work up as well.
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